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[Early in the day, people throughout the village might spot a suspicious rainbow streak jetting upwards into the sky. Higher and higher and higher she flies... Until, suddenly, that rainbow streak is rapidly plummeting down, faster and faster until there's a resounding CRASH!

Oh, was that your house she bumped into? Maybe your garden? Business? Whatever the case, there will be a few of these ridiculous crashes until Rainbow, being the stubborn pegasus that she is, moves onto plan B.

A bit later, something a little strange will appear... a cloud floating around the village. Now, seeing clouds in the sky isn't all that abnormal. Just another part of everyday weather.

But what about clouds that float ridiculously close to rooftops? Clouds that hover suspiciously over buildings, people, and are isolated from the others? Tiny clouds that, if one looks close enough, they may catch a bit of a rainbow fringe, sometimes a pair of binoculars, over the edge of the fluffy white stuff.

That's right. This cloud is spying on you strange people. ...Or whatever's up in the cloud, anyway.

Feel free to witness either event-- Dash's crash landings from the lovely barrier or her recon mission.]

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[... She's pretty sure that if that thing that just crashed a few steps ahead of her had crashed into her she would be dead. In fact she has seen her life flash in her eyes for a moment.

Luka's first reaction is to look at the sky, expecting to see several meteors or objects in general falling towards the village at a crazy speed. But no more come, so she moves to inspect aka stare at the falling obj-... What the hell is that?]

[...ugh. For a few brief moments, this cartoon pony is completely still, groaning as she gets back up to her feet, shakes off a little, and looks back up to the sky. She hasn't noticed Luka just yet, and she mutters something to herself.]

There's gotta be some way to break through that thing...

[It talks. It's talking and it looks like a horse, but smaller. And blue, with rainbow streaks, and wings. And it's talking.]

... Pony.

[Her eyes, are basically star filled as she stares at the pony.]

[Oh, huh? Somepony's behind her?

Giiive her a second to turn around, and--]

[What the hay?

Without even thinking, she's backed up a little. Blinking, she rubs one eye with a hoof (somehow breaking the rules of horse anatomy)... and then she stares.

... And stares. Just be glad this isn't Fluttershy. Dash isn't gonna book it, but she is a little weirded out here.]

What're you supposed to be?

A girl.

[The reply comes easily. And she's not bothered by being stared as if she's strange, she knows the feeling.]

A girl what, though? I mean, you're obviously not a pony.

[Annnd definitely not a monkey... or a rabbit... or a diamond dog, or anything she's ever seen in Equestria. Go figure.]

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A human girl. Are there no humans in your world?

[Most probably, or their cultures are just very separated given that the pony doesn't seem to have seen a human before.]

No. There are monkeys, and they kinda look like you, but that's about as close as it gets.

Th-There's a theory that states that humans are an evolution form of apes, like monkeys indeed.

... Are there more ponies in your world?

Tons more. I come from a whole town of ponies.

[Not to mention how ponies are kinda the dominant species in Equestria.]

I come from a whole city of humans too... Are all ponies like you? Like pegasus?

[She's trying to imagine it, so cute.]

A-Ah, uhm, what's your name? M-Mine's Luka Megurine.

Nah. There's unicorns and earth ponies, too.

[Not that she's... actually explained the differences yet. Way to go, Dash.]

Anyway, I'm Rainbow Dash.

E-Earth ponies are like you but without wings?

Yep. No wings and no horns.

[So your run of the mill... talking ponies.]

A-And can all of them t-talk like you? Th-The ponies in my world d-don't talk.

Ponies that don't talk? Why? Did something happen to 'em?

[That would be a yes.]

[She'll take it as a yes, indeed.]

No... It's just... They don't talk, o-or at least not human language. I-I'm sure they can communicate with each other, i-in their own language, w-which humans can't learn.

[It's a possibility and a theory that hasn't been denied.]

[Human language? Funny way of putting it; Dash always figured it was just... a language. After all, dragons and other species can speak it too.]

Do they have cutie marks? And what kinda stuff do they do?

[She had to make the differentiation somehow, at least in her world.]

U-Uhm... Some wears r-ribbons I think... If the h-humans with them put them on them. I'm not sure what ponies do, I-I've never been this close to the o-ones at my world...

So they're like pets?

[What is this even?]

N-No... Th-They are m-more than like pets. But they c-can't get those things on by themselves... But I know that if th-they don't like those things you c-can't put them on them either. T-The people that live with them usually are d-dedicated to them, I think. To take care of the ponies, I mean.

[At least from what she knows. Once certainly can't have a pony as if it was a dog.]

B-but... Th-There are competitions for ponies, a-at least I know there are c-competitions for horses.

That still sounds like pets to me, but whatever you say.

[She shrugs. That competition bit is interesting, though.]

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